Next stage has begun.

So, I printed out all 442 pages of the new draft, and I'm beginning to go over them with a red pen to find grammar, spelling, and continuity goofs. This phase usually goes pretty fast, so it's a good sign I'm at this point.

(Oh, and if you're wondering why there's so much white space on the page, it's 'cause that's how Word prints documents when you have comments present.  It also gives me lots of room for writing long notes or new content)